User talk:Ktan57

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Leadership in aviation (November 3)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 01:57, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

PEER REVIEW - vcheng52
The role and effect of leadership is prevalent in aviation. In a normal flight a pilot is expected to interact with a number of people including air traffic control, the crew, and other pilots. The role of a leader has a direct impact on the success of a flight like in any team environment. Basic human emotions and mood also play a role in the success of teamwork and flights.

Ineffective leadership: When pilots are at higher altitudes, they experience mood changes, cognitive decrements and more mental pressure than they would on land; these pre-existing conditions paired with a a negative attitude from an ineffective leader will build up and could lead to serious risks and accidents.

Just put the sentence under the header "the Pilot leader" into the effective leadership section. Maybe include more in the lead section.

Draft:Leadership in aviation
As you revise your Draft:Leadership in aviation article, take a look at Manual of Style/Layout and Manual of Style/Lead section. These should give you a better idea of how a Wikipedia article is supposed to be structured. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:29, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Leadership in aviation (December 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  00:02, 3 December 2015 (UTC)

Link to the Leadership in Aviation Article
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Leadership_in_aviation

Your draft article, Draft:Leadership in aviation


Hello, Ktan57. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Leadership in aviation".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 12:44, 1 January 2017 (UTC)