User talk:Kuehnemankr/sandbox

Peer Review- Kuehnemankr
1. The overall tone of this article is great, I can't tell what information is from the article and what you added. The analysis of the data from the table is very helpful in the fact that it breaks it done and helps identify what important information has been 2. The fact that the history is after the first table is slightly wonky in that the two populations tables should be next to each other, as to not throw off the reader. I know with Wikipedia we are not allowed to use opinions but maybe add a little of interpretation of the numbers to give them a little more meaning. 3. I think by simply rearranging some of the material give it could make the article more clear and less confusing. Jherna42 (talk) 14:25, 2 April 2018 (UTC)Jherna42

Peer Review by Nataliep3
The additions made to the article are informative and straight to the point. They do not show any type of bias or opinion. The history portion is well written and easy to understand. The addition of the UN demographic estimates chart is also a great tool, but the writing is a bit harder to understand. Adding the units after the numbers and rates would make the paragraph more clear. Nataliep3 (talk) 03:45, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Kuehnemankr, I have reviewed your article. I think it was good. I liked that you have graphs, photos, and tables to demonstrate the information you present. I also saw that you have lots of up-to-date sources, it is a great thing. I don't know what else to say other than it's better than mine.Tramtngoc (talk) 03:49, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

peer review by Vivian
I think adding data tables to your article is very useful because it gives readers more information on Guatemala and it makes it more simple to read and compare statistics. You also have lots of information in the article which is good because you clearly did research on this. Your article is concise and gets straight to the point without being bias. it is a well written article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Viviansayavong (talk • contribs) 05:03, 3 April 2018 (UTC)