User talk:Kuengg

Feedback by Anna Beerli
I like your entry - besides improper citation I have only some rephrasing recommendations.

Cordeuxia Edulis – isn’t it Cordeauxia edulis? -	Content table after Introduction

Introduction: -	The title of this subsection could be Biology or Morphology? -	You tend to list your information in short single sentences, try to include it rather into 2 or 3 sentences which makes it more interesting to read.

Distribution -	Nice -	Maybe you know in which reagion it can be found most nowadays? Cultivation -	“The average temperature is 25°C. The average rainfall is about 250 - 400mm, but it can also grow with a rainfall of 150 - 200mm.” I think you want to say: For optimal plant development, average temperature and rainfall requirements are 25 °C and 250-400 mm/ ? (time=year) respectively. Yeheb can cope with minimal precipitation levels of (…). In your current phrasing the temperature is referring to the plant itself. -	“It must be sown, where the taproot an grow” – fertilizer is applied not sown. -	Small proportion

Maybe you could think of restructuring this section a bit-it would be helpful to have separate titles such as: Environmental requirements, Plant protection and Fertilizer, Yield,..

Use Food: roasted Fodder: The shrub is evergreen and thus a good fodder… Fuel: … also when wet. Poison (maybe not a very suitable title): Roasting or boiling of freshly picked seeds provide a good insect defence.

Nutritional Aspects -	A bit scarce, but sufficient for this lecture.

References -	The numeration is missing, also within the text you did not include citation numbers.