User talk:Kuengg/sandbox

Ich hoffe du kannst etwas anfangen mit meinen Verbesserungsvorschlägen. Ich habe einfach alles aufgeschrieben, was ich noch nicht “perfekt” finde. Der Artikel ist aber besser als meine lange Liste vermuten lässt. Er wurde merklich verbessert/erweitert gegenüber dem aktuellen Eintrag. Die Reihenfolge sollte etwa dem Text folgen, einiges gilt aber auch mehrfach, habe es einfach dort erwähnt wo es mit auffiel. Vieles sind Fragen, meisten weiss ich auch nicht was richtig(er) ist. Einfach zum nochmals nachschlagen, ev. präzisieren ...

The titles has to be reclassified, because no title with the plant name is necessary (is given automatically)(== instead ===) Should be no space between evergreen and the comma Pod instead of pos! Contains both sexes = hermaphroditic (if you put as a link, everyone can look it up, if necessary. Decide if you make a space between value and unit (3m or 3 m), or better: have a look how it should be done Introduced is maybe better than exotic Botanical names should given in italic The average temperature is 25°C. What does this mean? Is that the optimal growth temp. Or the mean temp of the origin region or... The average rainfall should be...? or The plant grow well with only 250 -400 mm? Or ... optimal rainfall... ..., but later the yield is continually improving? Or what is after the “few years”? „It must be sown, where the taproot an grow.“ Sorry, i don’t understand. ..of a yield of 5kg seeds (per tree?) so on a good, skip "so on" in the rainy season… start sentence with a capital letter contains instead of cotains You should include the references properly. Use the button “cite”, this will make automatically a reference list. You should indicate each statement out of one of the references with inserting the reference. This will set a corresponding number. Have a look for a example on a other entry, by going there to “edit”.

It would be nice, if you would insert a few links to other Wikipedia entries. Eg. Kenya, taproot etc.

Do you know something about the total yield world wide? Would be interesting to include. Look at the existing entry, I think there are a few information that should be still included in the text. eg. the common names. It is allowed to reuse parts of the original ;) Best regards Matthias