User talk:Kurtwurt/Friedmanniomyces endolithicus/HelloSYK Peer Review

With a few changes, your article would be clearer and more organized. Overall, I think you have a very solid outline. Mentioning the person who have discovered and identified the fungus, F. endolithicus would let the readers know more about the history of the fungus. The second point of taxonomy and history section is a bit confusing to understand. I think it would be clearer if you reword some parts. I also think you should elaborate more on what MEA, PDA, OA, and CZA are. Maybe mention that they are types of media. For the general audience I also think linking the word "Extremotolerant" to its wikipedia would be better. In Habitat and Ecology section, "too" should be changed to to and "then" should be changed to than. For the reference number 9, I think you forgot to reference the article correctly. Other than that, your references are good and it is good that you used various references.

Here are some more references you could possibly use to make your article more detailed.

Fungi of Antarctica: Diversity, Ecology and Biotechnological Applications https://books.google.ca/books?id=u_edDwAAQBAJ&pg=PA116&lpg=PA116&dq=friedmanniomyces+endolithicus+physiology&source=bl&ots=5M5dZaIhgK&sig=ACfU3U2koU8X3DBmjAj51W_pw9bfNEEGXg&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwij85yq5snlAhVviOAKHSvlD0wQ6AEwCHoECAkQAQ#v=onepage&q=friedmanniomyces%20endolithicus%20physiology&f=false '''This book is a textbook written by Luiz Henrique Rosa. It talks about the reasons of why the description of the fungus was derived from the morphology of the fungus. And it also mentions that the fungus was extracted from some places, such as soils and granite in Antarctica.'''

Antarctic Cryptoendolithic Fungal Communities Are Highly Adapted and Dominated by Lecanoromycetes and Dothideomycetes https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmicb.2018.01392/full '''This is an article that talks about the habitat of the fungus, F. endolithicus and that it is part of cryptoendolithic community. The information about Friedmanniomyces endolithicus is in the 3 paragraph of the discussion part.''' HelloSYK (talk) 20:33, 1 November 2019 (UTC)