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HDPE article evaluation
Article evaluation

i chose article called "High-density polyethylene"[1]

1. everything in the article is relevant to the article topic, but missing quite a lot of data (chemical/mechanical/physical properties). 2. the article looks neutral. 3. viewpoints looks balanced. 4. the citation links are working. 5. the article cites refers mainly from commercial websites. not from really independent scientific sources. 6. quite a lot of information is missing and should be added: chemical/mechanical/physical properties, structure, formation processing etc. 7.i couldn't find the rating of the article. it is a part of wikiproject polymers.

Potential project topics
A list of topics for wikipedia articles in the order of (my) preference:

1. HDPE. i saw that the article of HDPE in Wikipedia is (surprisingly) quite poor and missing a lot of data, comparing to the enormous use of this material in our world. seems like a good article to improve. 2. Hot plate welding. this article is a sub article inside article called "plastic welding". again, very short and general article. seems another good article to improve. i can take the majority of material from the handbook and i believe it will be easy to find material in the OSU library. 3. We didn't study more than this topic yet, and my knowledge in plastics and composites welding is about zero, so i can choose as an article any of the welding processes that are covered by the handbook (extrusion, implant induction, ultrasonic, vibration, spin, RF, IR and laser, etc..)and improve their wikipedia articles.

David — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kushnir11 (talk • contribs) 11:10, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

Instructor Comments
While the article on HDPE is very detailed, there is a very detailed article on Polyethylene. Please review that article on Polyethylene (see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Polyethylene) and then let me know if that is still your top choice. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.146.92.87 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

link to extrusion welding article
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Extrusion_Welding — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kushnir11 (talk • contribs) 18:09, 1 April 2018 (UTC)