User talk:Kuske.morgan/sandbox

Peer Review for Workplace Democracy
Hello! Something I noticed when going through your Sandbox article that you have "Types of Discrimination" and "Reasons for Discrimination" and I personally feel like those could be considered the same thing. I saw that you have just bullet points for types and paragraphs for reasons but I feel like if you combine these the article will flow much better! MontanaFender (talk) 21:56, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

Some source citations in the "Employer efforts to balance representation" section would be beneficial. Baltz.adam (talk) 22:01, 4 April 2018 (UTC) Look at and revise 3rd paragraph of "Looking at the position of women in World War II U.S. history." The wording in the first couple sentences seems weird. Where was this information found? No citations in this paragraph. Baltz.adam (talk) 22:12, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

Some words like "neoclassical economics" or "non-pecuniary cost" are rather complex words for an average reader. If that could be simplified I'm sure it would help make some of the page easier to understand. GEzzell (talk) 22:09, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

I've noticed in Combating Discrimination, that a couple of the recent court cases are not cited. If those could all be cited, that would make that section of the article more complete. Kennydesrosiers (talk) 22:18, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

What To Fix
Kendra/Jacqui/Nate/Morgan - Intro

Jacqui - Condense definition find better definition

Morgan (completed) - Take examples from identifying discrimination and put into examples sections

Kendra - Shorten neo classical and link

Morgan (completed) - Shorten non neoclassical and link

Jacqui - Employer efforts balance – sources

Kendra - Get rid of old examples

Nate - (Mostly completed-just need better source for a statistic) Affirmative action (sources and rewriting)

Nate - Minimum wage (finished writing-just need source for first half) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kuske.morgan (talk • contribs) 15:39, 5 April 2018 (UTC)