User talk:Kvinnamedklass

April 2022
Hello, I'm WikiHannibal. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Einride, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. WikiHannibal (talk) 10:47, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Please explain your contributions using a descriptive edit summary. Changing information on Wikipedia (such as numbers and dates) without explanation, as you did at Einride, may be confused with vandalism. Thank you. WikiHannibal (talk) 13:50, 1 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi! This is my first time editing a Wikipedia page and I'm trying my best to get it right.
 * Which sections didn't have reliable sources to back them up? I removed two sections where Einride's own site was listed as the reference. I hoped that would help fix the issue.
 * I don't think I changed any numbers or dates..? 🤔 Very grateful for any guidance to get the updated information into the page.
 * Thank you so much!
 * /Alice Kvinnamedklass (talk) 13:56, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, the second warning I added (above) is not very helpful, I am sorry for that. The problem is not with dates or numbers, as the example suggests, but with general information you add to the article which is really not in the sources you use. This may be considered subtle vandalism, that is why I used this specific warning. I wrote some of your unsourced statements as examples in my edit summaries to Einride, e.g. your addition of "operates the largest fleet of heavy duty electric trucks in Europe" is in fact sourced as "operates one of Europe’s largest fleets of electric trucks" and "the largest ever electrification of heavy duty road freight" while in the source the CEO of Einride only says "“This is one of the biggest deals ever made to make transportation sustainable”. See for example, WP:PROMO MOS:PUFFERY. Also I recommended making smaller edits at first - changing/replacing specific sentences/paragraphs rather than changing the whole article in one go. Also, the lead (see WP:LEAD) of Einride does not contain references to sources bcs all information shloud be included in the body of the article first, with sources; the lead than serves as a summary of the body of the article. So perhaps it would be better not to edit the lead at all at this point. Thanks, WikiHannibal (talk) 12:26, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Ah! Thank you so much for clarifying. I received the text from the internal PR team and trusted them that everything was corrected, but I'll change the sentences you pointed out and try to do smaller edits and see if those can get approved. Thanks again for all your help here <3 /Alice Kvinnamedklass (talk) 07:54, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, since you receive info from "internal PR team", please get familiar with WP:COI before editing the article in the future. Generally speaking, it might be the case that Edit requests were more suitable than editing the article directly. WikiHannibal (talk) 15:57, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi again. Thank you so much for holding my hand through the maze that is Wikipedia editing ☺️
 * Then I'd like to make an Edit request instead 😉
 * The changes are to all parts of the page. But maybe starting with the history, the different years and some additional information.
 * Is it easier to add information than to change existing? Then we can maybe add the products?
 * == Products ==
 * Einride designs and sets the technical specifications for their vehicles, to integrate with their intelligent platform, Saga. They utilize various partners for the manufacturing of their vehicles.
 * Einride pod: The US version of the Einride pod has the same industry leading automation technology as its European sibling, with SAE level 4 self-driving technology and safety architecture allowing for safe operations without a driver in the vehicle, but is better adapted for US roads and conditions.
 * The Flatbed pod: A modular vehicle built to accommodate any kind of shipping needs, including transporting containers to make the transition between sea and road freight.
 * Einride Saga: Using AI, Einride Saga digitally optimizes the shipping network, stores it in the cloud, and puts it in the users hands.
 * Einride e-trucks: Einride offers CET (Connected Electric Transport) trucks that are planned, operated and tracked through Einride’s Saga platform. Kvinnamedklass (talk) 08:14, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, as you can read in the WP:COI subsection, WP:COIRESPONSE, edit requests are made at the talk page of the article you want to edit. There is also a link to WP:ER, and as explained there at WP:Edit requests, in your case, you make the request by adding the template to the talk page and describing what exactly you want to change/add. (Change X to Y, Add X after Y, etc.; creating a products subsection as you did above shloud not be problem.) There is also the WP:ERW wizard to guide you. Adding info insetad of changing/removing seems a good start. Generally, it is better to use sources that are not behind a paywall, so that the ditor checking the request can in fact, check it. You do not have to use a different source for each sentence/topic/paragraph (it looks from the text above as if that was your intention but I may be mistaken); there is no problem in using one or two WP:RS sources if they contain info you want to add. WikiHannibal (talk) 05:58, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

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