User talk:Kwainwright/new article name here

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The lead sentence should give her primary claim to notability. I am not sure that this draft does that. I took a look at magazine and newspaper indexes, but did not find her mentioned. She does not appear in ArtIndex. Finding the Vogue article about her clothing designs from the 1970s would be useful, as well as the one in Woman's Own from 1975.

It is better to give the full titles of books, such as Re-make, re-model: art, pop, fashion and the making of Roxy Music, 1953-1972. If a source is not entirely about the subject, it is considered appropriate to specify the inclusive pages which deal primarily with the subject. Since this book is primarily about Bryan Ferry, it may have only tangential mention of Pamla Motown. As such, it might be used with a pinpoint cite to a particular page for a particular fact as a footnote, but not as a general reference. You might want to look at Citing sources/example style for citation form.

You are skating awfully close to a copyright violation of http://web.me.com/pmotown/Site_3/Pamla_Motown.html. --Bejnar (talk) 04:10, 19 December 2009 (UTC)