User talk:Kwelsh1103

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Peer Review
Hello, Kwelsh1103, I am attempting to provide a peer review on your selected article. I hope I am doing this correctly. I think a few areas that can improved upon in this article is:

The article could expand on the historical overview. A more detailed historical overview of popular music that includes key developments and trends over time.

The article could have more contextual information about the social, cultural, and political forces that influenced popular music.

The article could benefit from the inclusion of multimedia elements such as images, videos, and audio clips. This could help bring the subject to life and provide readers with a more immersive and engaging experience. SadPandaBear (talk) 17:29, 18 February 2023 (UTC)SadPandaBear (talk) 17:24, 18 February 2023 (UTC)