User talk:Kwesi Peelz

All of which said, the lead may indeed need some trimming and the article as a whole could use a little copy-editing. Additionally we need to work on referencing as there are claims of fact that are not cited to reliable sources. No need to add another tag as I am mentioning it here. My usual rule of thumb is that any paragraph that contains any claim of fact that is not obviously uncontroversial should have at least one reference to a reliable source. We have entire sections that are unreferenced, so that definitely needs to be tightened up. Finally please remember that none of this is a criticism or personal attack. We are all on the same team here just trying to build a great encyclopedia. -Ad Orientem (talk) 21:32, 4 November 2018 (UTC)