User talk:Kwhitlow2413

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Ali's Peer Review: "Sleep" Article
Hi Katie,

You seem to really have a grasp on your topic and are knowledgeable of the studies you mentioned. I like how you introduced studies of sleep and infants in the discussion on children and sleep. I also appreciated how also added a study to the section on naps. I think this really adds to the information that the article is trying to get across, and really helps to substantiate the information given.

Additionally, some of the wording in the article could be altered to be more concise. For instance, the last sentence of the article is "Sleep has multiple benefits." This just seemed redundant given that you just told us that in all of the information you gave. It just seemed like an unnecessary conclusion sentence when the I think the note you ended on--"lowering depression and anxiety,"--was strong enough on its own.

Overall, I think you did a good job on this, and that all of your edits will be great additions to the article.

Aliyahz (talk) 23:31, 17 February 2019 (UTC)