User talk:Kwonbbl

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Kwonbbl, i don't want your first experience to be bad, that's why i'm giving you a bit more explanation. I reverted your first edit to Crucifixion of Jesus because your formatting was a bit wonky, and there was a problem as i see it with the content of the edit.

Format: When you put two single quotes (' ') around text, it italicises the text. Usually one doesn't want to do that except to emphasise or make it stand out in some way. Your text doesn't seem to need that structure.

Content: What you are adding might be taken as putting forward a point of view, something to be avoided here, WP aims for NPOV articles, that is a Neutral Point Of View, where the encyclopædia doesn't seem to be pushing in one direction or another. You may not intent this but, trust me, it will be taken that way.

I suggest that you take a few minutes to look at some of the Help pages linked in the bullet points above; they are useful, as are hundreds of other Help pages accessed through Help, and try to rework your edits & information. Myself, i'll probably take a look at it tomorrow and see how it looks.

All in all, please take this as it is intended, and Welcome! Cheers, Lindsay 17:47, 31 May 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia policies
Hello,

Regarding your edits to the Crucifixion of Jesus, it is clear to me that:


 * you know a lot about scripture
 * you are not familiar with Wikipedia policies.

Although your intentions seem good, the edits you are making include a number of problems, including WP:OR (original research), their length and the fact that they are major edits that have not been discussed on the talk page. Please accept my apologies for reverting most of your edits. I mentioned this on the talk page there, but you have kept on editing. I will keep the Goldstein references etc. for they are encyclopedic, but the rest have to be reverted. Please read the Wikipedia policies and try again. Thank you and welcome to Wikipedia. History2007 (talk) 20:09, 31 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I have removed your recent edit to Crucifixion. I strongly suggest you read WP:Verify and WP:Reliable so that you understand why Wikipedia articles need to be based on particular kinds of sources and are not a suitable place for editors to argue their views on a subject themselves.--Doug Weller (talk) 20:50, 31 May 2008 (UTC)