User talk:Kxm087/New Sandbox

Are there any spelling or grammar issues that stand out? Part D contains questions that would help integrate more knowledge to the article of our choice. On the sandbox, the questions are not clear. Part D also has run-on sentences. For example, one of the statements reads, “I would like to know more about his wife, Martha Amelia Sophia Loewen, as well as continuing my search as to who knighted Sir Barnard in 1919. Martha was born in 1866, and her father was in the flour and distillery business. She died in 1942.” This statement can be grammatically corrected. On Part D search terms using bolean operators or other keywords are missing. Are their links working? On the Copyediting section, the highlighted links do not work. Part A contains a link shows an image that relates to the article. However, the link has expired, and it can only be seen by coping the url and pasting it on a search bar. Did they create accurate APA citations? The citations are accurately formatted in APA format. Is there anything confusing about their information or questions that you have that could help them provide a better understanding to future Wikipedia readers on the content? The article is about the life of Francis Stillman Barnard, and Part D one of the statements reads, “This source is relevant because it gives lots of information about her and her family as well as a clue as to Sir Barnard's knighting.” This could be worded differently specifying who is “her and her family” Jxv084 (talk) 03:13, 29 April 2019 (UTC)