User talk:Kyamauc/sandbox

Sentences should have the citation for the source at the end of the sentence, rather than just listing them at the beginning. You could add sections on Country Women and The Women’s Press, if you can find enough information. It may be good to remove the section on her death, this could be included in the early life section, which could be re-titled as biography or personal life. The section labeled death currently is one sentence long. You could add more about the impact of her two famous writings. Make sure to double check spelling and grammar.

Editing the article as is: The lead is only one sentence, it could mention her most famous works as a second sentence. Her personal life is distributed throughout the article, but could be made into one section. The way it is organized right now, her most important contributions were the women's magazine and the land trust, nothing about her art as a title. The information is fine, but a different section name might better reflect her life.

EckerdGeologist (talk) 23:39, 12 March 2020 (UTC)