User talk:Kyguy22/sandbox

a figure with your description of claudins could be relatively simple and helpful in the first paragraph and don't be afraid to add transmembrane region with a short definition

same with transmembrane domain interactions. maybe a short definition or take out one way, unless there are more, then maybe include some of those.

'However, on the genetic level, there genetic conservation is not observed as is their structural conservation." I'm not really sure what the purpose of including this is. Maybe expand on it a little more.

Great start. Mostly I just think you need to expand on some of the statements. Maybe identify some of the interactions the N terminal can have. :)

Good luck out there Good2bheretoday (talk) 06:42, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

ROUND 2! 1. You are my hero 2. Maybe before saying they all have the same structure, give some idea of how many there are even if it's just 'there are many kinds of claudins' or something. Might make the transition more smooth 3. I really like the figures. Great crystal structures. Maybe labeling the structures you are describing on the figures could supplement your information well. Again I think it's going well just need to expand on some of the sections. Good luck! Good2bheretoday (talk) 05:52, 10 December 2021 (UTC)