User talk:Kyle.long098/sandbox

Peer Review (Cayman Simpson): Your draft is good, double check for grammar errors.Caymansimpson11 (talk) 12:17, 13 March 2019 (UTC) Cayman Simpson

Peer Review (Braden Giesecke): Grammar and punctuation is good, but it needs one more citation.BradenLG2000 (talk) 15:27, 13 March 2019 (UTC) Peer Review- Caleb: Add more content and cite the information. Good real life examples added to the article. Calebdb01 (talk) 15:26, 13 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Calebdb01 (talk • contribs) 16:15, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

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Kyle, you've got some good information here. I'm not clear which items you intend to add to WP, but it all seems credible. You'll want to be sure you find content gaps in your article page and fill those gaps with your research. This is a good start. JAirhart 20:47, 12 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)