User talk:Kylejeffreykerr/sandbox

I am required for my CSC104 Computer Sciences class to practice copyediting on Wikipedia articles, and making them as accurate as I can. I will be looking for grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes, but I'll also be looking for things such as capitalization, proper tenses, or possibly rephrasing sentences in order to make them flow seamlessly into each other. Here is a link to my page with a few touch ups on the obvious mistakes I've found so far (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kylejeffreykerr/sandbox). If anyone has any other opinions on what to change feel free to let me know. Kylejeffreykerr (talk) 02:01, 9 March 2014 (UTC)