User talk:Kylemackey41

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Hi Kyle: East is currently unavailable, so he asked several of his fellow administrators to look over his talk page while he's out for the next three weeks or so. First of all, let me welcome you to Wikipedia.. I've included a template above to help guide you through WP. I've also linked several sections below to help guide you to what I'm suggesting

Let me respond to your proposed article, I see several problems with it:


 * A) First of all, it does not assert Notability of the company. I invite you to read this policy to determine if it should fit under WP policies: Notability_(organizations_and_companies). What we're looking for is coverage of the company in Reliable, Third Party Sources


 * B) It's not written in WP:NPOV terms. Wikipedia articles cannot come off like advertising for the company. Using terms like visionary is a red flag for advertising concerns.


 * C) Most of the article is devoted to its product, the Amalaki, and what it's made of. Again, that comes off like advertising, I'm sorry to say.

Right now, I do not see much hope that a netural, encyclopedic article that can be created that would satisfy Wikipedia's policies that I've placed above, but I encourage you to continue to work on it if you think there's a version that can eventually pass Wikipedia policies. Hope this helps. SirFozzie (talk) 00:26, 19 July 2008 (UTC)