User talk:Kylierubel45/Child mortality/Emmafitch211 Peer Review

Hi Kylie! Your article is a super interesting choice. In your first caption, I think the "L" in "leading" should be capitalized, and it might be a good idea to include that the image is of a graph. I think your second caption is fine. Overall, I really like the images that you found, they are very relevant to the topic!

Emmafitch211 (talk) 23:53, 30 November 2021 (UTC)Emma