User talk:Kyra.Pompeo/Urban forest inequity

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Overall great additions to the paper just a few minor changes I would make:

-See if there are any hyperlinks to terms, people (like Steven Strom), and concepts (ex: flood) that connect your article to other Wikipedia articles on the platform,

- In the urban forest section, in the 4th sentence starting with "Urban forests are recognized" you have a citation that is in the middle of the sentence, just make sure to put it at the end.

- In the MillionTreesNYC initiative I would see if there is a hyperlink you could connect your page to. Liv.spatol (talk) 15:41, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Very insightful additions to the Wiki page. My feedback is similar to Olivia's comments: -Look for links to add as I am certain there are few to be highlighted. I wonder if NYPR has a link or if not, a red link may be created. -In your last paragraph on the MillionTrees NYC, I would suggest that you would substitute "This initiative serves ..." to "MillionTrees NYC serves ..." to avoid any redundancy.

Overall, information is clear and concise which makes for a very complete Wiki page. FHM