User talk:Kyrandb/sandbox

Great job overall in contributing to the existing article. You should review what is already written and correct the punctuation and grammar because there are some mistakes in wording and such that, once corrected, will make the overall article more clear and professional. In the section you added that discusses different Acts that were passed, use the past tense since they were passed in the late 1800's and early 1900's and their effects were felt in the past. Overall, just read through what you wrote and check for clarity in thought. While reading through your paragraphs, I have to re-read them to understand exactly what you are wanting to say because of word choice, descriptor placing, punctuation (strange or incorrect comma placement), and incorrect or confusing tense. Overall, good job, just review what you've written and clean it up in clarity and appearance.