User talk:Kyuen28/sandbox

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otherwise seems OK. -- Jytdog (talk) 20:58, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
 * please fix the citation.
 * it is better to use prose (a list separated by commas) than bullets. The ref should be at the end of the list.
 * refs come after punctuation
 * i think it would be relevant here to have a sentence about diagnosing if it is hypothermia from cold exposure or from something else being wrong. This article is not just about accidental hypothermia...