User talk:Kyyylove/Temporalis muscle

Your writing is completely unbiased.

I'd create a lead paragraph that summarizes a bit about the temporalis muscle and then goes into some summary about whatever topics related to the temporalis muscle youre going to talk about. Then your body paragraphs would reflect those topics you chose to write about from your lead paragraph.

So you talk about the superficial layer and the second layer in your paragraph. The lead would include a bit more about these two and then you'd have separate paragraphs from the lead expanding on them.

I'd also remove this:

"Rather, it is important to avoid believing fiction to be factious. Common textbooks and diagrams illustrate the temporals muscle as a single unit that are easily identified by any common student. Despite the textbook illustrations."

Its a bit out of place and unnecessary.

I'd also find some more sources to supplement your article.