User talk:LE2003/L’s LGBTQ+ Migration and Immigration, Queer African Communication, and Asian Queer Communication Studies

Dr. E Review
L, please see my Canvas feedback on writing support as you work to the next draft for Thursday. You will respond to that feedback here too. You will also receive feedback from R and Brianda to help on this writing. (OsaRosa (talk) 05:55, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you Dr. E, I will make sure to discuss Africa as a whole before the specific countries and be sure to add more information about source 2. Will also change the "White US" idea and keep that more general and research based. I am also going to focus more on how men in Ghana are challenging the idea that individuals have to come out in order to be valid. Thank you for your feedback. LE2003 (talk) 17:53, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

C
Hi!

I think you have a really great start on your article! I think it is very factual based with no persuasive nature which seems to be a major thing for Wiki's guidelines! I do wonder if some of your sentences that don't have citations could use them solely because of how tight the guidelines are around them for wiki. That might be something you should check with Dr. E or our Wiki staff editor about. Aloe Andrews (talk) 14:50, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your feedback! I will go in and add more sources for the sentences that i do not currently have sources for. LE2003 (talk) 17:50, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

C Response
Thank you for your feedback! I will go in and add more sources for the sentences that I do not currently have sources for. LE2003 (talk) 17:48, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Rs peer review
Hey girl,

Really like this so far, I'm excited to see what you do with the new source you are adding and how you'll work it in to what is already there. I agree with C's response on how well you kept it neutral. RjR5789 (talk) 18:17, 16 April 2024 (UTC)