User talk:LEAP Team 5/sandbox

Hello Team 5.

I think your scenario needs to be a bit more clear. Is the entrepreneur the owner of both XYZ and ABC Inc??? I am confused by the actual structure of the issue. Maybe using legitimate company names instead of "ABC" and "XYZ"-- this makes it very confusing because I don't understand the actual details of the case.

Additionally, who are its suppliers, and what do you mean by creditors? I think it could be in your best interest to potentially just add a few more details. The case just seems to jump around. Make it a story. It does not need to be long, but I think each statement needs to relate. It looks like you built the scenario around the issue, and since we don't know the issue just yet, it's hard to deduct it from this scenario.

This is what I found by reading through the first paragraph of the scenario. I think you should build it out more.

good job!

Amy Tournas (talk) 19:05, 5 April 2020 (UTC) and Team 15

Hello Team 5, I think it could be better to mention which company format was for each ABC Inc and company XYZ. But I love your specific rules and analysis for these cases. Thank you for sharing it!

Tosel978 (talk) 15:05, 5 April 2020 (UTC) and Team 7

Hello Team 5, Also think the situation need more details. For example, which industry like what kind of business. Who are the suppliers and customers? Is there some other stakeholders etc. In general, this is a very important in every industry in business and area in our life. Maybe in the future, we can find some logic our instruction to guide our behavior. Good luck. LEAP1 (talk) 03:34, 6 April 2020 (UTC)Shangzhe Team 1 MAAP

I would remove the italics. Also in your scenario try and add abit more description explaining how the entrepreneur acted in the ABC company, that way you can make claims that the corporate veil was not pieced in the analysis. It would be interesting to mention the aftermath of company ABC, do they file for bankruptcy? Also it seems likes the neutral voice summary was copied from somewhere, want to put it in more simpler terms, so that anyone is able to understand the material. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shaisraza (talk • contribs) 03:36, 6 April 2020 (UTC)