User talk:LGBTMyanmar

Draft:Khin San Win
Hi. I have moved your article to draft space because it needs improvement. You can work on it there before submitting it for review. There are two main reasons: Please continue to improve the article. Deb (talk) 13:38, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) The grammar is not really good enough to make the subject clear to English-speaking readers.
 * 2) The claim of notability is not clear - reference formatting needs to be improved.