User talk:LLMHoopes/sandbox

Input wanted on Mary Osborn revisions
Mary Osborn is a stub and I'm trying to fill out information about her important breakthrough methods and discoveries. The material in this sandbox will be moved to the article, leaving the Infobox and the photo intact. Please help me make the revisions as clear and non-jargon filled as possible and note other things that you see that need to be addressed.LLMHoopes (talk) 02:21, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Lovely article. Didn't see much other than an extra period after one sentence: "She noted in 2012 that there was still a leaky pipeline for women scientists in Germany..[5]"  Vale6674 (talk) 23:48, 23 August 2018 (UTC)