User talk:LOMATSUI

Recent edits to Hemp
Greetings. You may have noticed that I just reverted your addition to the Hemp page. The reason for this was that although you seemed to have followed our guideline on sourcing, which is good, the language you used was somewhat journalistic in nature, and not encyclopedic. Specifically, the use of the term "exciting" is a little problematic. I can think of two ways of dealing with this; you could omit the adjectives altogether, or you could add a separate sentence, saying "the development has been described as exciting by..." and attribute it appropriately. You may also wish to read our manual of style, what wikipedia is not, and what words to avoid. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. Regards, Vanamonde93 (talk) 08:33, 26 August 2014 (UTC)