User talk:LaHaga462/Herbicidal Warfare

This is really fascinating. You use a lot of quotations, though. Wikipedia would prefer if you put this information in your own words.

Mialejeune (talk) 22:03, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

There is a ton of information here! Under your legality section I think you could use some editing. There is some extraneous information. Try to have each sentence be dense with explicitly related facts. Also, you could use some paragraph breaks! The Angolan War section is good but can you find different language to refer to its disputed nature. Who is disputing it and why? From your writing it appears obvious that it happened, so why the dispute? Overall though, this is a very solid start! Brendankarch (talk) 19:18, 31 March 2021 (UTC)