User talk:LaShaeDavis/sandbox

Nicole's Peer Review for Postpartum psychosis
Hi LaShaeDavis,

After looking at your sandbox I did not see any edits that you made to be able to do a peer review but I have some suggestions. I love the topic and think it is a great article that could really help someone. I think first off the article is bias. When looking at the support section which is think could be the most important is that it only tells you one place to get help. There needs to be other options so that it is neutral. In the history section there is a citation that is needed. I think overall the article does a great job of explaining the topic and helping someone understand it. In the article the line "it may be a form of bipolar disorder" keeps showing up. I think this is redundant and maybe should be changed or explained as to why it could be a bipolar disorder. I look forward to seeing what you do with the article! Nicole6794 (talk) 01:56, 18 February 2019 (UTC)