User talk:Labossofyou/sandbox

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Nice start on this article. A few notes on how you might improve this


 * Your sections headers ('Early life', etc.) should be formatted as ==Early life==
 * Don't forget to add wikilinks to terms which might be unfamiliar to the average reader, or that they might want to know more about.
 * Instead of numbering your references as [1], [2], etc., use inline citations. The edit box (i.e., the area where you actually type) has a [Cite] button in the top right corner. If you use that, select the appropriate citation template, and fill it in, you will be able to generate inline citations that not only are linked to your text, but are also easier to maintain, since they're in the same place as the text they support. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Great Job so far! I found this website https://wfpp.cdrs.columbia.edu/pioneer/ccp-jeanie-macpherson/ that you might want to check out. There is an entire page on Macpherson as a director and writer. A lot of the inforamtion overlaps with what you have already written, but there are a few personal details on there that I think would really enhance your article! Rdanto825 (talk) 22:26, 29 November 2014 (UTC)Rdanto825

Great start to your wiki page. You have a lot of good factual information and I can tell you put some hard work in researching your topic. The only thing I have a suggestion for is using inline citations and fixing your headers like said above. Also I know its hard to find fact on personal life but if you could beef up that section that would be good too. Overall, great work! KevinHowe12 (talk) 16:00, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Headlines Added
I added Headlines to your wikipedia page. I also attempted to add in the rest of your reference links but I was unsuccessful in figuring out how to add the same reference twice in one article. Also for you page I would suggest adding more to your header that explains who the person is and what they did. You only have one sentence right now, I would just add a few more sentences summarizing what you wrote in the actual article to just add more to the header. The actual article you wrote is really well written. Clawson93 (talk) 20:56, 30 November 2014 (UTC)

Pages Don't Exist
A few of your citations are highlighted in red because a wiki page does not exist for that word or phrase! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mcreid (talk • contribs) 00:58, 9 December 2014 (UTC)