User talk:Laila.tabassum/sandbox

hey guys, this is where we can discuss and notify each other of any edits or questions. Laila.tabassum (talk) 16:59, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey you guys, I'm looking more into the Hazel McCallion Public School for the page, and the recent Portrait unveiling at The South Asian Gallery of Art.P.rasbach (talk) 20:35, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Also, I think it would be a really good idea for us to mention to recently established Hazel McCallion campus at Sheridan. P.rasbach (talk) 20:43, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay, so I was looking at the article and the talk page of it. There is a lot of bias in it, so I am planning to go over it and make it more neutral. You guys are welcome to join me in it.Laila.tabassum (talk) 20:46, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Just so no one else covers the Sheridan topic, I just wanted to let everyone know I've written a brief/section on the topic already. P.rasbach (talk) 21:16, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

How do we add references and do I need to add it to the list of notes at the bottom. Laila.tabassum (talk) 21:35, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Laila, this is the code to add references: (this is where you put the link in) < /ref > (in between the brackets, do not leave a space, I just did that so it would show the code)P.rasbach (talk) 21:48, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey you guys, So I added the Sheridan paragraph I wrote to the sandbox, along with the portrait addition to the 'Honours' section P.rasbach (talk) 21:50, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Paige, that was quick! and it worked. I also saw your edit to the institutes part, you work really fast! Laila.tabassum (talk) 21:56, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

Tanya, I didnt write the point about the school in the honours section. I wrote a summary in the Invovement in Learning Institutions - you can see it in the sandbox. P.rasbach (talk) 15:23, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I noticed we haven't posted the banner marking that this article is being edited by new users for a project. I will do that now! Em.ryan93 (talk) 17:15, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Also, I noticed under 'personal details', underneath McCallion's picture, there isn't information about what languages or how many she speaks. I thought it would be interesting if we could find this out. I will look into it. Em.ryan93 (talk) 17:27, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Another thing I noticed is that the references are listed under a section titled 'notes'. Should we change the title to references? Also, the references seem to be all different styles. It would be much easier to read if they were all one style. Em.ryan93 (talk) 17:33, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Em, it would be interesting to add that. We know as a basic that she speaks English and French. Also for the 'notes' part, I think it is correct, I checked some random pages on wiki and their are titled notes. I can help you with the formating of the references. Laila.tabassum (talk) 18:16, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

I think Laila is right, most wiki pages are titled notes. P.rasbach (talk) 16:23, 25 March 2012 (UTC)

I will write the section on the Hazel McCallion Academic Learning Centre under the new section I created on her involvement in learning institutions. P.rasbach (talk) 22:01, 25 March 2012 (UTC)

Guys, have any of you heard from Tanya? I haven't, I would like to know what she is planning on doing and like to see some contribution. So far we only saw her for a minute to form our group, and she texted me her wiki username but after that she hasn't responded. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laila.tabassum (talk • contribs) 22:53, 25 March 2012 (UTC)

I haven't heard from her at all but I messaged her, hopefully she'll get back to me. P.rasbach (talk) 23:09, 25 March 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I added the UTM part of her Involvement in Learning Institutions. Let me know what you think. P.rasbach (talk) 23:59, 25 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Paige, I think it is good. Did Tanya respond? I am thinking I will contact Mick tomorrow if we hear nothing from her. Laila.tabassum (talk) 01:31, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Paige, the new section looks great! Laila, I haven't heard from Tanya either. Also, I made a small edit but I don't know how to insert the small number that links to the reference. And where do I insert the code that was earlier posted on our talk page- in text or under the 'notes' section? Em.ryan93 (talk) 14:51, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Em: After the edit, right next to the part you are referencing you put the code url < / ref > thing and the small number is generated by itself and your link gets added to the notes list as well. Em and Paige: So Tanya sent be a brief text that she wants to meet up today, but I can't make it since I am working on my other essays. However, I did ask her to text me if she has any questions or instead talk to all of us on this wiki page but she didn't respond so I am not quite sure where we stand. I am kind of worried, what do we do? Laila.tabassum (talk) 17:40, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I think we should e-mail Michael to notify him of our situation, just to play it safe so our mark isn't affected. We should message him as soon as possible before it's too late to comment on it. P.rasbach (talk) 17:52, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I added the Hazel McCallion Senior Public School section to the Involvement in Learning Institutions section. I'm done with that section now, do you think it's enough? Also Laila, have you figured out how to put this all up when we have to submit it? I'm sure if you are still having troubles, we can ask Michael in tutorial tomorrow. P.rasbach (talk) 18:16, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I added her feature on the Rick Mercer Report to the Honours section.P.rasbach (talk) 18:47, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I will look at the tutorial on how to do it, it is on the course wiki page. Also I think you have done more than enough! but considering Tanya, what do I tell him? Laila.tabassum (talk) 19:35, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks Laila for clarifying that for me! I am going to add to the Personal life section since it is short and I found some more information about her personal life. Also, I didn't end up finding any information specifically stating what languages she speaks. Em.ryan93 (talk) 21:26, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey girls, if you are stuck and don't know what to add or edit I have an idea... There is nothing on her involvement with Trillium hospital. They named a health centre after her, so its a big deal! I'll do it if no one wants to but I've already added a lot. P.rasbach (talk) 21:32, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

I can do it since I haven't added much information. I think for the most part we are good as far as the progress is going. Laila.tabassum (talk) 23:53, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys, I've read all the conversation and information, that you've already gathered, i'm sorry for such a late reply I think i can add information about Public school, named after her and also i found some articles about her worship, which can be helpful Tanchitos (talk) 02:36, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Since you guys made a lot of work and i haven't added anything yet, if you have any other ideas, tell me and i will develop them Tanchitos (talk) 02:47, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Tanya, I've already made the section on the public school. If you want to add more please be my guest, but keep in mind that it should be just a brief summary of the school because the school already has a wiki page. So if you are going to add something, please keep it minimal. P.rasbach (talk) 02:54, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay, Paige, i just thought it is one of the most honoured things made for her. I saw your point in the "honours" so i can make a small summary Tanchitos (talk) 03:02, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Tanya, I didn't make the point of the school in the honours section. I made it in the Involvement in Learning Institutions section - you can see it in the sandbox. P.rasbach (talk) 15:29, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Laila, since you missed tutorial today, Emma asked how exactly we should go about uploading our work to the actual article. Michael said to just copy and paste our work to the real article. Do you know how to do this? P.rasbach (talk) 17:45, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

I think we should write down what we've contributed to the project on this talk page as well, just to ensure the work has been evenly distributed. This way, our marks match up with our efforts. I have added the "Involvement in Learning Institutions" section, and two points in the "Honours" section. P.rasbach (talk) 17:52, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Also just a heads up, I spoke with Michael today and he said to use Canadian spelling in our edits. P.rasbach (talk) 17:53, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Paige, your section about involvement in learning institutions seems pretty full and finished, how about i create another section - something concluding her contribution in politics? Tanchitos (talk) 19:11, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Paige, the course page had information on how to do it, but that also simplifies things. I think that it is a good idea to state what you did for the record. For the most part I added the Health Care section, but I also have been editing some parts of the intro and political life, to reword or correct some sentences. Also guys, I need your student numbers for the doc that I am submitting to Michael, however my cell phone (for some reason) stopped working last night and I don't have it anymore so I can't recieve any text. Please give me your student number by emailing it to laila.tabassum@utoronto.ca. Laila.tabassum (talk) 19:52, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

I also have done some editing where needed throughout the whole page. I also added some more information to personal life and the banner at the top of the article. Does anyone have any ideas or suggestions of anything else I could write or add to the page? Em.ryan93 (talk) 20:33, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

guys email me your cumbers as well, I got my phone back but lost all my contacts. Laila.tabassum (talk) 21:43, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

sorry about the cumbers part, i want your numbers. lol. Laila.tabassum (talk) 23:48, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Girls, i've just created another section, something more like a summary, called "the achieved results" containing the info, that is not mentioned in honours but still shows her effort and contribution. Tanchitos (talk) 00:37, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Tanya, you might want to read the rest of her wiki page, some of the info you've put in your new section has already been noted in the wiki page. P.rasbach (talk) 02:57, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

'''Hi guys, I need everyone to make their final edits by 6-7 pm tonight. I have prepared most of the document and will add our final edits to it and to wikipedia tonight. Also I still need Paige's student number emailed to me at laila.tabassum@utoronto.ca (or text it to me). If there are any questions let me know. Thank you!''' Laila.tabassum (talk) 14:09, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Ok Laila I just sent it to you. My final edits have been made as well. P.rasbach (talk) 15:48, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Paige. Everyone I have encountered a bit of trouble. The final doc is supposed to be 3-4 pages but the whole document is too large to fit in it twice (the before and after version). I talked to Michael, he said we should only put up stuff we have worked on. So let me know the passages you guys worked on, especially Em- I know you edited some paragraphs here and there. Thanks guys! Laila.tabassum (talk) 17:49, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys, so I think that we should put what Tanya put as the Achieved Results in the Honours section because the two categories are pretty much the same. I also think we should call the section "Achievements". What do you think? P.rasbach (talk) 20:03, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

I guess it would be better, Paige. Should i change it? Tanchitos (talk) 20:23, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Sure P.rasbach (talk) 21:32, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Laila- I mostly edited the Personal life section. Em.ryan93 (talk) 23:07, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay, done! Tanchitos (talk) 01:40, 29 March 2012 (UTC)