User talk:Lakshmi Devineni/sandbox

Hi Lakshmi,

I've edited your sandbox content rather than the actual wiki article. I thought it appropriate as you're the Arden Syntax expert, and I didn't want to make any inappropriate changes.

Your work is very impressive. It clearly shows a depth of research, your contribution has improved the quality of the article. The layout and headings are appropriate, making the content readable. Citations and referencing are excellent.

Re my corrections, they were mainly tense, article and punctuation errors. Re tense: you used past and present perfect instead of the present tense. Re articles: a, an and the were missing. Re punctuation: try to use more commas, especially for relative defining clauses.

The other suggestion is to review the video on referencing, there is a function which allows you to manage repeated references. When I looked at the article last night, someone had actually edited your references (lucky you!), combining the repeated ones, you'll see what I mean when you go to the article.

I enjoyed reading your article Lakshmi, well done.

Cheers, Cathy Davis 5IHC (talk) 23:00, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

Hi again Lakshmi, it's the 'Named references' function you need to use for repeated references, pathway is:

Cite

Named references

I can show you how to use it if you're still not sure. Cheers, Cathy Davis 5IHC (talk) 23:25, 19 May 2013 (UTC)