User talk:Lammerdm/sandbox

Angry Birds keeps an unbiased tone throughout the article with most citations where needed. Parts of the article are missing citations where they should be. It covers most of the topics expect why people became addicted to angry birds and obsessed with the franchise. As a reader, I wanted to know more about how the creators designed the game to be addicting for those who played. The article covers topics from what it is to how it was designed and the global impact. The flow of the article is a little out of place in some sections. The complications and cancellations of Angry Bird spin offs should be placed at the end. It somewhat disrupts the flow being in the middle of the article. I could not find any similarities between my observations and the observations made on the talk page. Most of the discussion were about removing banners and fixing references.

Lammerdm (talk) 01:48, 5 October 2018 (UTC)

I plan to be adding content and editing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Find_My_Friends. Currently, I am thinking about adding more to the history, explaining how it works, why people use it, and adding citations. Find my Friends article only talks about the history, version history, features, and other apps that have the same idea. I want to dive deeper into why people decide to download this app and if they believe it is accurate. Also, explore any upcoming changes and additions that could be made to the app and develop the history more.

Changes to the article in the talk page include the China GPS offset problem and adding a different article to replace the original China GPS article. Modifying external links have also been discussed on the talk page.

Lammerdm (talk) 10:58, 10 October 2018 (UTC)

https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT201493. "Set up and use Find My Friends." Apple. 17 September 2018. 15 October 2018.

https://www.pcworld.com/article/1164455/find_my_friends.html. Dan Moren. "Find My Friends". PCWorld. 23 December 2011. 21 October 2018.

https://www.guidingtech.com/19468/locate-family-friends-iphone-ios-find/. Alvaro Bernedo. "How to Locate Family or Friends on iPhone/iOS with Find My Friends." Guiding Tech. 16 Jan 2013. 21 October 2018.

Lammerdm (talk) 20:19, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Ideas to add to Find My Friends:

Description of Find My Friends: Find my Friends has a limit of how many friends one user can follow and one may have up to 100 friends. (apple)

How it works: Only works with other Apple Products. One opens the app and invites friends to share their location. Accepting a request automatically gives a friend access to see one's location. (Guiding Tech) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lammerdm (talk • contribs) 02:53, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Edits to be made to Find my Friends
Edit #1 to Features Section: According to Apple, there is a maximum of 100 friends. One may also track friends and receive notifications when a friend leaves or arrives at a new place. Location can be shared temporary or indefinitely when accepting friend requests. When meeting up with friends, you can get directions to their current location.

Edit #2 to Description: People download Find My Friends to keep track of their children and keep up with their friends.

Edit #3 Safety Concerns: Apple predicted there would be safety concerns regarding sharing one’s exact location with someone. There are numerous safety precautions to allow the user to only share their location with people they want to share with. One can only obtain friends by accepting friend requests and can remove friends when necessary. Users can stop sharing their location altogether or only make it temporary with a certain friend.

^ I made these edits to Find my Friends Lammerdm (talk) 19:18, 27 October 2018 (UTC)