User talk:Lampthecat/new sandbox

Isabelle's Peer Review
This looks like a good start to your wikipedia article. Make sure you finish completing the incomplete sentence at the beginning of the third paragraph. In addition, I would specify the term 'sectors' in order to truly understand what the SSNIT is dependent on. Otherwise the section seems pretty well structured snd a good foundation for the rest of the article. One area you can expand on in order to understand more about the company is why it keeps winning petroleum company of the year. What are the parameters for the award and does that mean this company is significantly better than its competitors? How does it differ from regular oil companies? This might be pertinent to understanding the company and the work it does in the area. Overall this is a well-written, neutral section.

Sarah's Peer Review
Specific Comments: - Starting the discussion using the term “Goil” could be confusing to your reader? Maybe try to define it - Standardize if you are going to capitalize Goil or not - Instead of saying “the state” it might be better to just say Ghana - Why did the transition to becoming a SOE take so long? - I think the first half of the first sentence of the third paragraph got cut off

General Comments: - It may already be on the Ghana Oil Company page, but if not I think you should start with a brief explanation of what the company is and what is does before delving into the history to give your reader some context - I think some of your writing is a little vague as in a reader would have to know what you are talking about to fully understand, so maybe try to make it a little clearer to the average reader?SarahOll (talk) 21:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)