User talk:LaniHack/sandbox

Peer-Review by Jose Zamora Z (Duplicate)
I think your drafts does a great job following the 5 Pillars of Wikipedia. I think you presented all the information available about the topic in a neutral and respectful manner. I think the content is very thorough and concise. I do not have any suggestions to improve the content. There sources seem reliable though the citations are missing the authors (but I assume these are all peer-reviewed journal articles). I do recommend taking advantage of the editing toolbar to highlight titles, heading, subheadings, etc. You should also incorporate links to other wikipedia pages, as well as the citation links (also see editing toolbar). My only recommendation is then to improve the visual style of the article so that it communicates the information more easily. JoseZZ (talk) 18:29, 1 May 2017 (UTC)