User talk:Laniw/sandbox

Hi Laniw! Great article, the sections are very strong and well organized and the lead does a good job of explaining the previous research on the subject as well as useful background information. I made a minor grammatical edit in the intro, and I think there are several places where you can add citations. For instance, in the "Tone" section, you mention that tone is important, but without a citation I think that the statement is a bit redundant and can be removed (while keeping the sentence outlining the lack of research on tone). It might also be a good idea to create a section about threats to the language's survival or preservation efforts if you can, since you mention it being endangered in the introduction. Again, great work!