User talk:Laora8888

Your submission at Articles for creation: Olivier Vadrot (June 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Broccoli and Coffee was:

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Broccoli &#38; Coffee (Oh hai) 04:30, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question
Hello, Laura Drouet! I'm Jcc. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk. jcc (tea and biscuits) 21:31, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

Hello Jcc. Thank you so much for your time and crystal clear comment. It will help me a lot I think. I was scared the references were not good enough... I will try to make it looks less like a CV by studying the examples you sent me. And then try my luck again! Thank you. Best wishes.

Entry declined after second attempt
Hello everyone! My latest entry about French artist Olivier Vadrot was declined for the second time for the same reasons as before despite I did update the text significantly by adding many certified articles as references. All the sources quoted are from "independent, reliable, published (mostly printed) sources" and I feel the text is very neutral (I can't understand where these so-called "peacock terms" are in the text)... Can anyone help me?

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question
Hello, Laora8888! I'm CASSIOPEIA. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk.  CASSIOPEIA(talk) 01:44, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Olivier Vadrot has been accepted
 Olivier Vadrot, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Worldbruce (talk) 03:00, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
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