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Peer Review- Hui- style architecture
Peer review:

The editor has done a great job to introduce the Hui-style architecture from the origin of name to the description of its layout and architecture features. The sections are divided well and the use of images are being very supportive. The tone is generally neutral and very descriptive. Most of the sources are cited clearly. It's a good start and actually so far it can be a very informative and helpful page for reference. To develop this page I have a few to recommend:

- as a outsider of architecture I suggest to explain more architectural terms or build more links, like the one done with "patio" - the language are very descriptive which is good. It would be more helpful for understanding if there are more images interpreting the method of layout. - I encourage to add more about the featured architectures of Hui-Style and famous architects; - the origin of name is very interesting to know. I would like to see more about the development along the history and its influence, if applicable. - the some of the sentence structures are a little bit repetitive. Such as those starts with "The ...", could be improved but not a big problem.

Thanks for the contribution to build this page. Great Job.

- Ren.yij