User talk:LatoyaT1096/sandbox

Sarahc299 (talk) 17:40, 26 November 2018 (UTC)== LatoyaT1096 Peer Review ==

LatoyaT1096 Peer Review

Peer Review
Hi Zande Group! Here is my peer review for your current Sandbox edits!

Clear structure: Make sure formatting is correct. You'll need to cite using the citation button rather than MLA or APA style as is in your Sandbox. Sentence structure/grammar will also need to be updated if you want it to fit with the rest of the article. I would recommend going to the library experts if you wanted ways to merge writing styles.

Balanced coverage: Adding more about the women, or at least telling readers about why there isn't a lot of information on the women in the first place, would be awesome!

Neutral content: The majority of your addition is fairly neutral, but avoid opinion-based language or modern slang such as the part when you said, "Azande women weren't women to put themselves out there to flirt with men."

Reliable sources: All great and reliable sources! Don't forget that the use of quotes is not encouraged by Wikipedia. Instead, try to paraphrase and put things into your own words while still making sure you cite the ideas themselves.

Kesstiel (talk) 23:05, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Kesstiel