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I am planning on contributing to the Laminated Veneer Lumber wiki page. Below are some sources I plan on using:
 * Allen, Edward and Iano, Joseph. Fundamentals of Building Construction: Materials and Methods. Fifth Edition. Wiley & Sons, 2014.
 * Ching, Francis D.K. Building Construction Illustrated. John Wiley & Sons, Inc., 2014.
 * “North American Laminated Veneer Lumber.” www.awc.org/pdf/greenbuilding/epd/AWC-EPD-LVL-1307.pdf.
 * http://www.icc-es.org/Reports/pdf_files/load_file.cfm?file_type=pdf&file_name=ESR-1387.pdf

LatrobeKnows (talk) 00:44, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think this is a really great start to a somewhat complicated topic for people to understand. Because of that, I think it'd be helpful if you included some images of perhaps the process. At the same time, some of your sentences were too short, so it didn't flow very well, but seemed staggered and awkward to read. That might be because you're still researching the topic, so I understand. I really like how you included a "history" section, which I think gives the topic more legitimacy and makes it more likely that your edits will remain. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AmadeusNYC (talk • contribs) 04:09, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

Instructor comments
These are some great additions, particularly the history section. Two mechanical suggestions:
 * In your sources, consider applying Template:Cite web to make the unadorned URL citations more informative.
 * Consider using Template:Convert to provide automatic SI conversions of U.S. customary measurements and vice versa.

Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 04:00, 27 November 2017 (UTC)