User talk:Laugerso

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Hello, Laugerso, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hope article
Thanks for your additions to the hope article. I noticed that you added lengthy quotes based on a primary source. You shouldn't use a primary source like this, but rather rely on a secondary source which discusses and describes that the primary source said. In addition, you should keep your quotes short (usually no more than five words) and only use them when the words of the source are key to the reader's understanding. Thanks Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:46, 18 November 2021 (UTC)