User talk:Lauren1500/Zan Fiskum

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

I know we talked about these policies and the need to comply with both WP:NOTABILITY and WP:BLP; there's also a section oriented to singers here: WP:SINGER.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:50, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you! Lauren1500 (talk) 10:39, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

feedback on progress
Hi

You are definitely making progress. I know I mentioned it before, but the biggest challenge is going to be complying with rules about notability based on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(music). There are some rules about incorporating chart positions, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Record_charts -- unfortunately including quotes from the show is not typical. You could make a paragraph along the lines of critical reception. This article might be a useful model for you: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amy_Vachal

I know it's not the news you wanted, but I think it's not quite ready for go-live, since it's likely to draw an immediate notability challenge. I recommend trying to push it further forward.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:01, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Thanks Kaylea I appreciate this feedback! Lauren1500 (talk) 22:38, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I am pinging you to see if I my article is ready to go live. Thank you! Lauren1500 (talk) 22:52, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Lauren1500 (talk) 23:55, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval
Hi

You'll see that your early go-live got you some feedback from Wikipedians. Be sure to incorporate all of that as you go live with your remaining changes. Good work!

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
 * 8) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 01:36, 13 February 2022 (UTC)

Got it! Thank YOU! Lauren1500 (talk) 01:39, 13 February 2022 (UTC)