User talk:Laurenmacias/sandbox

Peer Review
Lauren, Your page was very informative and your choice of subject, Thanadelthur, shed new light on the early beginnings of the Hudson Bay Company. After reading this page it really appears that the HBC probably would have had a long struggle to get off the ground if at all. I understand that your subject comes from a time when Natives were more or less looked down upon and so not much-written could exist. The fact that you found this much is astounding! I only have two suggestions for you, one, if you can find more information on William Stuart and create a link for him and under the heading "Life" change "home country" to perhaps "tribal lands" or "tribe." Besides that, it's good to go!

Jbanda0351 (talk) 20:28, 2 April 2019 (UTC) Jacob