User talk:LaurhaLozoya/sandbox

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While your information is interesting, I'm not sure it's new or significant. It seems to be well-known already. To improve WP, you need to provide information that is new or unique. JAirhart 14:32, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

You have good ideas for what to add to your article, now you just need to put them into sentences and cite your sources. The facts that you have are really good for your article I think. Destinyspangler (talk) 17:03, 12 March 2019 (UTC)