User talk:LaurynTS4/Jean-Albert Dadas

Peer Review
Overall, I feel like you are on the right track for your Wikipedia page. The three main things that I would work on this week are:


 * 1) Adding citations. I can tell that you have done extensive research on your outcast, but I have no idea where any of the information is coming from. I also struggled with this, but once you start adding them it gets pretty easy (Wikipedia will usually automatically cite if you have a link to give it), and it's a lot easier to cite as you write instead of having to go back and figure out where you got the information from.
 * 2) Continue adding to the parts where you have 'TBC' in the same style you have for the existing sections. You have a very neutral, clear, and engaging tone in the sections you have already written, you just need to continue to build upon your article!
 * 3) Consider if the section on Dromomania is necessary. I see that there is already a Wiki page on this topic, so I'm just wondering whether or not you need to have a section on it in your outcast's page.

ReimyLi (talk) 15:18, 8 April 2024 (UTC)