User talk:Lavalos966/sandbox

You have a great start to your sections here. If I may suggest just a couple things, I think it may help to add in hyperlinks to terms that people may not be aware of such as femicide and you’d then be able to exclude the quick definition in parenthesis. Also, you state that the government has passed laws and created agencies; aside from Procurador de los Derechos Humanos, are there other examples that you will share? Overall, very well written and sourced correctly. This is excellent information that will contribute greatly to the Wikipedia page. Brendaram (talk) 17:34, 17 November 2016 (UTC)

good to go!
Nice work, Lena - you can move to the mainspace.Drlmanderson (talk) 23:24, 4 December 2016 (UTC)