User talk:LavenderSage19/Substantia gelatinosa of Rolando

Hello LavendarSage19,

I enjoyed reading your edits to the Substantia gelatinosa of Rolando wikipedia page. To review your proposed changes, I can see that you: 1. Added a table of contents (autogenerated?) 2. Added A section on Structure, Connections, and Gate Theory. 3. Added some content for the already existing main section.

As I am unfamiliar with Wikipedia and editing, I am unsure if the table of contents was autogenerated or if you placed it there yourself. Either way, it is an effective addition. Be sure when moving your edits to the main page that the table included the already existing "Functions" section.

As an individual who is unfamiliar with Substantia gelatinosa, I think something that would be very beneficial to this page would be a sentence or two describing what exactly it is? From my understanding after reading the first section a few times over, is that it is part of the spinal cord. The questions I have that are unanswered are: is it unique to humans? Mammals? What is the s the "Of Rolando" part? It appears you are planning on addressing the naming question. Upon first reading, especially with the redirection message, my assumption was that the "of Rolando" indicated that there are other variants. Maybe clarify if there are/are not, and if it is just a naming convention? I think your elaboration on the cell type, fiber, and location is well written and effective.

If your are considering which sections to add of the ones you list, the Structure section seems to build the most off of the material that already exists. You might also consider adding images, specifically ones that highlight structural or functional purpose (again, on first look at the image that is already present, my immediate assumption was that it was a type of aquatic organism located in a place called Rolando). If you are looking to expand upon what is already present rather than adding new information, presentation might be another great place to focus.

Great work so far!PolarBear10 (talk) 22:05, 30 March 2021 (UTC)