User talk:Lawallach/sandbox

In the first sentence remove the word "epigenetic". At the end of the sentence, you clearly state it is involved in the regulation of gene expression. Remove (Including human cells) in the second sentence. In the Lysine Methylation part remove the sentence that beings with "in the following diagram". Add the explanation in a caption or describe the process without mentioning the diagrams. It seems out of place in Wikipedia vernacular to introduce the figure.

In "epigenetic marker" the second paragraph seems like you are just explaining how H3k4me3 works generally and are no longer talking about its use specifically in scientific studies as a probe or marker.

have a separate Reference section.

Overall this is super good. just make those changes and make sure you are only including information that is necessary for this page and isn't redundant (as in better added to a different wikipage).

Best,

Delon